Could You Say That Again

Click bang whirr
How you want it sir
No reason to say
I would do it anyway

The first line I wrote because it was the title of the blog I just posted somewhere else. And the other three lines were built off of that. Though admittedly, it is a bit of a head scratcher eh?
I thought so too.

Your intent is clear
And what we have here
Is not at all good
Is that understood

Gee, I had to do some work on the second verse, because the fist one started off oddly.

Yes yes I do of course
Though sad I am indeed
That you must be the first
Maybe I was cursed
That this it had to be

Wait for it, you know what's coming next...don't you? I spelled it out clearly enough.

And bang went the gun
The hero was done
And his helpful helper
Was the doer of the deed

I knew you you knew that was coming. You're a good reader.

Thus nothing would be the same
Not ever not again
Not even when

Wait, is the hero dead, or just wounded?

So the blackening heart
Of the previously helpful man
Compelled him to do
A good follow through

Well, not good in that sense, just good for his freedom.

Hmm, that's interesting, I saw a different way about this when I quickly read it through. There's now two paths to explore here. Gee, am I going to take this from here and put it into Tuesday 42? Something to think about for sure.

That hasn't happened yet, that something I first wrote online made it into my Tuesday 42 work. Now the question is, should it?

Next when.


Charles Petrie